Your Sales Page Should Be Converting Better
Let’s find out why and fix it.
The Sales Page Optimizer Report is a quiet, thorough, no-fluff review of your existing sales page.
You’ll get clarity from a multi-factor diagnostic, personalized video feedback, and detailed recommendations.
This is a 23-point analysis that looks across five key questions that each potential client asks:
1. What Is This? Your Offer Positioning, Promise, & Hook
2. Do I Want It? The Clarity of Your Core Offer: The Transformation, Delivery, and Differentiation from their Other Options.
3. Do I Trust Them? Persuasion Engine — Proof, Objection Handling, and Conversion Boosters
4. Can I Buy It Easily? Conversion Flow — Visitor Momentum, CTAs, and Friction Points
5. Do I Feel Aligned? Relational Energy — Tone, Humanity, and Congruence
This is not a template or prewritten or generic script.
It’s a deeper review of your actual sales page.
🔎 What You Get:
âś… 1. A 23-Element Analysis and recommendations across the 5 main decision that your client makes.
We’ll review your page across 5 core categories and 23 individual design elements that drive conversions, from clarity and trust to CTA flow and emotional resonance.
Each element is scored and explained, with direct suggestions for improvement.
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Optional: My Personal Video Review and Suggestions
🎥 2. A Video Review of the Desktop Experience
You’ll watch me walk through your page as a first-time visitor, pausing, commenting, and calling out friction, confusion, or missed opportunities. It’s part strategist, part usability test.
📱 3. A Video Review of the Mobile Experience
See how your page performs on a phone, the way most of your visitors are view your page. I’ll show you what’s working, and what’s being missed because of layout or flow.
🎬 4. My personal critique of all the videos on your sales page
If your sales page includes a video, I’ll review that too from the perspective of your perfect client. I’ll assess tone, clarity, alignment, and whether it builds trust or leaks attention.
Who It’s For:
* You want insight into what is good and where to improve.
* Initially designed for Creators of Online Courses, selling your course for $200 to $2,000. Â
* You are already earning over $5,000 per month.  Â
* You want to more sales without spending more on advertising.
* You’ve built your own sales page you’re not 100% confident in.
This is not for people just starting out or trying to find their niche.
It’s for creators who are already in motion and want clarity—not fluff.
The Solution – Sales Page Optimizer Report
This is a premium review service that goes far beyond canned AI suggestions or surface-level edits.
This isn’t a one-click copy fixer or another “just swap your headline” tool.
It’s a full-stack, multi-faceted review system that dissects every element of your page through 7 separate analytical passes — examining everything from headline strength and structural flow to image congruence, emotional resonance, and persuasive sequencing.
You’ll receive a comprehensive report with:
- Individual Scores for each of the 23 Sales Page Elements
- Recommended Revisions
- Top 3 Suggestions to where to start
- A Suggested Adjacent Audience for your existing offer
- My Personal Video Review of your site viewed on a desktop and phone
- My Personal review and critique of any Videos on your Sales Page
It’s not just about fixing what’s wrong — it’s about helping you understand what works, why it works, and how to carry that skill forward into every future launch.
Rooted in the Best of Copywriting + Modern Messaging
Behind the system is a foundation built on the best practices from the legends of copywriting — we’re talking about names like David Ogilvy, Eugene Schwartz, & Claude Hopkins combined with timeless communication principles from today’s brand strategy leaders like Simon Sinek (Start With Why), Donald Miller (StoryBrand), Ann Handley (Everybody Writes), and Brené Brown (story-driven emotional resonance).
That means your sales page isn’t just optimized — it’s deepened, sharpened, and crafted to connect with the real humans you're trying to serve.
You Can Let Go of “Trying to Sell”
You don’t need to learn how to “close.”
You don’t need to master NLP tactics or memorize scarcity tricks.
You don’t need to become someone you’re not just to make your offer work.
You just need your page to tell your story — in a way that resonates, builds trust, and makes people say “yes.”
That’s what we help you do — quickly, clearly, and without forcing you into a role you never wanted in the first place.
📬 What You’ll Receive:
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A full PDF Scorecard with 23 scored elements and clear improvement suggestions, delivered within minutes
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Three personalized Loom videos: Desktop review, Mobile review, and Video feedback
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Video Reviews of your Site delivered within 72 hours
Sales Page Optimization Report
Pre-Launch Pricing: $149
($50 discount)
Why Work With Me?
I'm Rex Anderson, a retired attorney and expert in effective sales page design and effect.
- An attorney in Federal Court for 30 years. This experience taught me persuasive writing, clarity of thought, and compelling arguments are often the winning combination.Â
- A Passion for Quality: My love of quality craftsmanship taught the value of meticulous attention to detail, especially online, where impressions are formed in seconds.
- Expertise from the Tech Details to Influence Marketing: Persuasive writing strategies and presenting oral argument in court augmented what I have learned from studying influence and marketing. And a life-time of computer systems experience means I teach you or your team the "how to" of the concepts and ideas we co-create. I've built over 150 client sites for coaches & course creators since 2011.
- Direct, Action-Oriented: No fluff or confusing jargon; just clear, actionable strategies to increase conversions and boost revenue fast.
- Ongoing Support: I don’t vanish after the “plan” is handed over. I’m there to ensure the changes stick, track metrics, and refine our approach as new challenges emerge.
Imagine what it feels like when your sales page finally clicks.
No more second-guessing every sentence.
No more wondering if your price is too high, your story too fuzzy, or your structure too weak.Just clarity. Confidence. Calm.
You’ll walk away with a sharper message, a stronger page, and a clear plan to improve what matters most — without rewriting your whole offer or becoming a full-time marketer.
Most importantly?
You’ll know your page is doing the work — so you don’t have to.
Want To Start for Free ???
Start with my proprietary
Sales Page Scorecard that reviews your page and gives specific advice to improve your page on the
7 Essential Factors.
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This isn't the full Optimizer Report, but will give you a first look review of your page.Â
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Scorecard: Free & Delivered in Minutes